I Love You
You’re the love of my life,
My source of joy, my inner strength,
My dream every night.
You’re the light I seek,
The friend I want to keep.
You understand,
You make no demands.
You listen, you appreciate,
Yet you’re my toughest critic,
That’s a blessing I don’t want to forsake.
We share our dreams and our fears,
Helping each other through the years,
We argue and disagree,
Yes, love is not easy.
I’m flawed and so are you
But the love we share
It is sweet and true.
And so I say, again and again,
I love you now and forever more.
My lover and my partner,
Together we shall soar.
Tips to help you improve your love life.
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You prioritize your partner’s
happiness before your own.
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You love unconditionally, quirks and
flaws and work around them to ensure a peaceful and long-lasting relationship.
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You allow your partner enough time
and space for themselves.
§ You’re both, your partner's toughest critic and greatest fan.
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You believe that actions speak louder
than words.
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You tend to your unwell partner, even
waking up in the middle of the night, despite being tired.
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You stand by the love of your life in
their darkest hour and celebrate their achievements.
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You share a laugh with your
sweetheart, not at their expense.
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L Love is a beautiful emotion, but not as straightforward as we would like it to be. 💑Relationships need to be sustained and never taken for granted. 💓So if you are in love, may you continue to appreciate and cherish your partner and if you are looking for love may you find the love of your life.💘
HHappy Valentine's Day!💕
TThis post is part of the 'RememberingLove'BlogHop hosted by Manali Desai and Sukaina Majeed.
Your poem and those tips offer positive and thoughtful advice for improving one's love life. It emphasizes the importance of prioritizing a partner's happiness, embracing their quirks and flaws, and fostering a peaceful and long-lasting relationship. The mention of giving your partner space and being both a critic and a fan suggests a balanced approach to supporting each other. The concluding message about love being a beautiful emotion that requires appreciation and cherishing, along with the wish for a happy Valentine's Day, adds a warm and positive tone.
ReplyDeleteThanks Romila for your very appreciative comments.
DeleteTo all those who make love look complicated should read this! A simplified version with easily implementable tips!
ReplyDeleteThank you Nilshree. Love is beautiful but requires ,time, patience and effort
DeleteSharing laughs with your partner is so important especially when everyone is so up and about with their work and need for importance everywhere else. Good post. Mine's similar. Hahaha!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Cindy. Great minds think alike. (:
DeleteMarietta, I like your poem. It's simple but deep in terms of meaning. Tips are also practical, but I would disagree with the first one. Somehow, I feel that prioritizing the other's happiness over mine is not true love. Of course, it's my opinion.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment Janaki. I would think that doing little things for each other or surprising each other without being too self -sacrificial would would work.
DeleteYour poem expressed it well and adding tips to it you are helping many people understand the virtue of love and relationship. This poetry is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Tanvi. It feels so good to read your appreciative comment.
DeleteI really love this very mature and thoughtful take on love Marietta. Love is about sharing and supporting each other, only then it becomes lasting , lovely tips and beautiful words.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your lovely comment, Preethi. I'm glad that the post appealed to you.
DeleteBeautiful poem with such true and heartfelt words. The tips are bang on and much needed.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that you liked the poem Zenobia. Thank you.
DeleteYour poem on Love is so heartwarming, and deceptively simple. The tips are absolutely spot on - give each other space, never take each other for granted and do little things for each other. Thank you for writing this post.
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepti. I'm glad to know that you found the post useful.
DeleteLovely poem... full of love! I loved the tips.... never thought about tips for love. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Neerja.Just a few do's and don'ts to keep your relationship alive. I'm glad you liked it.
DeleteI loved the poem for its touching and meaningful words. For me love is one of the most important emotions in life which keeps us going in life. The one you love should feel the intensity of your love and for that you need to create your unique way of expressing it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Samata. It's so nice that love holds such an important place in your life and your thoughts are lovely.
DeleteThat's a lovely poem and some very practical and thoughtful tips. Thanks for sharing these with us, Marietta
ReplyDeleteThank you Manali. I'm glad that you liked the tips.
ReplyDeleteLove's various nuances come alive in your lines. Acknowledging and accepting the flaws of each other is the basis of deep love. The goodness has to be appreciated still more, of course. You have it all here.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteBeautiful poem Marrita, You make no demand and a you are my big critic. Yes, your poem say most of the truth. When we are in love we see everything you mentioned in your poem. Your tips are really helpful for everyone. Our actions speaks louder than words and we have to celebrate our partners achievement.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
ReplyDeleteHaving someone who call you out when you're being stupid is a blessing. Loved the poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Suchita.
DeleteLovely poem! The tips are perfect and both partners should follow these.
ReplyDeleteThank you Neha. :)
DeleteA positive love poem towards appreciating the partner. The tips seem relatable and connecting the dots we miss in everyday life
ReplyDeleteThank you Anuradha. :)
DeleteThis is such a sweet poem! I love those tips. You make it sound so easy. Fallin in love is so easy yet the maintenance of it... Your tips will be helpful for me in the future!!
ReplyDeleteThe poem is beautiful and the tips at the end are useful and can be helpful for many to help improve their relationships
ReplyDeleteLove the simplicity of the piece. Just defines that love is not as complicated as it it is made out to be. Difficult, yes. Those tips at the end are the cherry on top.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ritu. :)
Deletethis poem really makes you ponder over the pain and the happy part of love. it was really smooth sailing. Made me think of loved ones.
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
DeleteA lovely poem and those tips remind us that Love is a verb . It needs efforts to sustain it through tough times.
ReplyDeleteVery memorable words about love. This is a good reminder for couples gone astray.
ReplyDeleteYou share a laugh with your sweetheart, not at their expense.
ReplyDeletethis is so perfect!
thank you
DeleteRespecting each other's personal space and giving time are the best practices that make your love bond stronger.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful piece of poetry! Loved it!
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